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This week I have learnt how to use paragraphs and I have improved on full stops and have written more then I would of written.
I am proud of this work because I worked super hard. I also gave it my best work not them most writing i can do but most descriptif with lots of detail.
The part i found challenging was putting full stops in and paragraphs.
Kia ora Lachlan,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing with us. I like that you focused on the full stops because a piece of writing without full stops is like an ice-cream with no cone or a soccer star with no ball to play with! What do you think helped you to write more than you normally would?
I look forward to seeing more of your fabulous work.
Mrs Taylor :)
Thank you Miss Taylor
ReplyDeletefor your feedback next time I will try try to add if there was no soccer ball. The thing that helped me write more was sitting on my own all focus on the keyboard.